Daniel Rawlings Post 3 School Magazine

Following showing people my first draft for my school magazine cover, i received feedback from three different groups of people.

The comments were as follows,

Group 1:

• Overall effect: Professional, good title layout
• Images: Good composition although the logos seem to big
• Text: Simple but catchy

Group 2:

• Fits the brief
• Nice Picture
• Layout of the text around the image is good
• Use of the logos is good bye the white background does not look to good.

Group 3:

• Medium close up picture ✔
• Laid out correctly ✔
• Masthead ✔

As you can see all three pieces of feedback were written in three different ways, this may make it look more confusing, but it gives me a more widespread outlook on what i have done right and wrong.

I believe now that with more practice of the programme Serif, i shall be able to "neaten up" my page and add better and less formal looking graphics.